Walking Back

May 20, 2010ishabelle

The roads that I travel on,
The deeds I’d have gladly done,
All the tears I would have shed,
The walls I’d have painted red,
The times that I cried for you,
Moments I was black and blue,
The bets that I have all lost,
Paying this very high cost,
The risks that I failed to take,
Vows I never want to break,
The breaths I held just for you,
The things I just couldn’t do,
The lost ring on my finger,
The pain that seems to linger,
Words that I just couldn’t say,
The smiles I have thrown away,
The phone that will never ring;
When I look at everything,
Again, these things, I’d go through
For one more moment with you.

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It has been a pleasure writing another poem for the rally. I want to really thank Jingle for her irreplaceable efforts in organizing this weekly rally. There is really no one like her. She is very dedicated to the poets. God bless Jingle! 🙂

I want to nominate Beth for next week’s Perfect Poet. Her poetry is very captivating. One could not help but read through all of her words, imagine the story of her poems, and be amazed at the adventure her poetry brings.

Comments (17)

  • Jingle

    May 20, 2010 at 4:14 pm

    another perfect post,
    how nice!
    thank you for the efforts and love for our Rally.
    you are one of the kindest, bestest, and smartest…

    have fun!
    😉

  • Artswebshow

    May 20, 2010 at 6:22 pm

    This is another of your best.
    Keep writing.

  • dustus

    May 20, 2010 at 8:04 pm

    Inspiring lines…
    “Words that I just couldn’t say,
    The smiles I have thrown away,
    The phone that will never ring;
    When I look at everything,
    Again, these things, I’d go through”

    Very emotional poem; can definitely relate.
    Thanks 🙂

  • shanellis

    May 20, 2010 at 9:10 pm

    Touching poem Isha, I hope you don’t have to throw many more of those smiles away.

  • Viola

    May 21, 2010 at 1:32 am

    Your poem was touching with a little sadest to it. “Moments I was black and blue” led me to believe you were talking about the person being abused, and you made my heart go out to that person. Very emotional poem but a a pleasure to read.

  • williamm50

    May 21, 2010 at 1:42 am

    your words amaze me, transfix me when I read your work,, tres bien xxx

  • Jingle

    May 21, 2010 at 3:28 am

    have fun visiting and commenting!
    😉

  • bryan

    May 22, 2010 at 12:57 am

    wow, Wow, WOW… I really liked this, and nominate you for an award.

    -bryan

  • Jingle

    May 22, 2010 at 9:53 am

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/

    deadline is within 24 hours,
    please submit your votes…
    thanks.

  • oinky

    May 22, 2010 at 3:40 pm

    wow..this is really a great poem..

  • wordwand

    May 23, 2010 at 7:29 pm

    Hi Isha, we miss you a lot.a lovely poem , fluent and nicely written.bravo!

  • laurenmichelleotheim

    May 24, 2010 at 3:53 am

    Such a sad, lovely, sweet poem. Stunning.

  • Batty

    May 25, 2010 at 10:09 pm

    flows perfectly,i like your choice of words, the use of colour. Somewhere along the path of life we all wish to go back!

  • trisha

    June 1, 2010 at 6:03 am

    wow. what a beauty. your absence is very much felt.
    take care and have fun.

  • jingle

    June 6, 2010 at 7:49 am

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/05/poetry-awards-4-week-21-participants-and-fresh-poets/

    three poetry awards,
    two general awards.
    Happy Saturday!
    Thank you for attending and leading!

    welcome back next week!

  • yuuki-chan

    June 11, 2010 at 2:05 pm

    You write some of the loveliest poems I’ve read. Keep it up dear! 🙂

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