Never

March 25, 2010ishabelle

Nevermore will I senses hear
The joyous ring of your laughter
That rings in my ears, so clear.
They are gone forever and after.

Never where will I again see
The sun that shines so bright.
The warmth that surrounds me,
The star that brings me light.

Never will I feel my heart
Skip a beat or beat twice as fast
It now feels so torn apart
Seconds, eternities, seem to last

Never will rose’s sweet scent
Linger in my memory disturbingly
All of my energy, I have spent
Forgetting, But, succeeding, unlikely.

Nevermore shall I my tongue taste
Sweet love that used to be there
All your memory has been erased
Never to be remembered never where.

This is my poem for today’s poet’s rally. I hope you guys enjoyed reading it. The idea just suddenly came into me while I was talking about Neil Gaiman’s Neverwhere with my friend. Enjoy… xoxo

I am also going to nominate one poet for the perfect poet award from Jingle. This is week 11. I have been joining the rally for more than a month now. I like it; I enjoy it. My nomination this week goes to: Trisha… Please visit her by following this link: http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

Comments (41)

  • Rajlakshmi

    March 25, 2010 at 2:08 am

    Beautifully sad.. The last para is so touching that i read it twice. Wonderfully written.

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 1:51 pm

      thank you, rajlakshmi… it is rather sad, i agree… πŸ™‚

  • anthonynorth

    March 25, 2010 at 2:37 am

    A deep thinking, poignant poem this week. Nicely done.
    You’ll find mine here.

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 2:04 pm

      thanks, anthony.. ill be sure to check out your poem… πŸ™‚

  • Jannie Funster

    March 25, 2010 at 3:29 am

    I really felt this one deeply, the part about the roses seemed especially sad, scents can hold memories forever.

    See you soon!
    xo

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 2:04 pm

      thanks, jannie… πŸ™‚

  • wordwand

    March 25, 2010 at 5:20 am

    thanks ishabelle for thepoem , a bit sad but well structured and well rhymed ( ab ab ) very nice.

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 2:05 pm

      thanks for your appreciation of the rhyme scheme, wordwand… πŸ™‚ yup, it really is sad… πŸ™‚

  • brian

    March 25, 2010 at 7:23 am

    nice. great book as well…sitting on my bookshelf now…such sweet sorrow in the words…

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 2:06 pm

      yup… my friend she was watching the DVD, and i got sooo envious… πŸ™‚

  • william

    March 25, 2010 at 7:41 am

    brilliant poem Ishbelle, great piece of writing, and I always love comin here, u get a great song as well lol xx

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 2:06 pm

      thankies so much, william… πŸ™‚

  • Jingle

    March 25, 2010 at 3:52 pm

    neat!
    i am glad you did!
    thank you and have fun!
    πŸ˜‰

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 9:43 pm

      thanks, jingle… im really glad to be a perfect poet this week… and im so happy to be passing on the nomination to Trisha

  • kseverny

    March 25, 2010 at 7:38 pm

    i enjoyed it.
    you’ve done well with this one

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 9:43 pm

      thanks, kokot… πŸ™‚

  • dustus

    March 25, 2010 at 9:20 pm

    Beautiful poem, sadness in those lines, but with emotion throughout. Nice!

    1. ishabelle

      March 25, 2010 at 9:44 pm

      thank you for your kind owrds, dustus… i really appreciate it…

  • pttyann

    March 25, 2010 at 11:07 pm

    Yes Ishabelle “Beautiful” been there for sure!!! Ejoy your day.
    Love ya πŸ˜€

    1. ishabelle

      March 26, 2010 at 8:53 am

      thank you, patty ann… πŸ™‚ i am so glad you could drop by…

  • BFG

    March 26, 2010 at 12:08 am

    “…disturbingly
    All of my energy, I have spent
    Forgetting…”

    hits a very true spot… happens a lot I think. Well done

    1. ishabelle

      March 26, 2010 at 8:53 am

      thanks… yup, it happens to everyone at least once in their life…

  • v!shu

    March 26, 2010 at 2:52 am

    thankyou tat was awesome… gr8

  • v!shu

    March 26, 2010 at 2:52 am

    thank you tat was gr8

    1. ishabelle

      March 26, 2010 at 8:54 am

      thanks for dropping by, vishu… u r welcome to come back here anytime…

  • I.S. – Keri Williams

    March 26, 2010 at 3:22 am

    this poem shows deep emotion and makes me long for special loved ones gone before…

    good one!

    ~IS

    1. ishabelle

      March 26, 2010 at 8:55 am

      im glad you think this was a good one, Keri… wink

  • justmeshakira

    March 26, 2010 at 1:30 pm

    You are so in love, Isha. Your blog is full of your love and dedication to Jeffrey. Stay in love, darling. hugs, shakira

  • ishabelle

    March 26, 2010 at 2:38 pm

    welcome back, shakira… haven’t seen you here for a while… πŸ™‚

  • Kiera O’Brien

    March 26, 2010 at 9:39 pm

    So much light, all from one last fading ember of life.

    It’s very sad, but also moving.

    1. ishabelle

      March 28, 2010 at 11:41 am

      thanks kiera… i wrote a sadder poem than this… πŸ™‚

  • shoelessboywonder

    March 28, 2010 at 6:34 am

    well done, good work πŸ˜› never again shall i be so late to check out your blog.

    1. ishabelle

      March 28, 2010 at 11:42 am

      no problem, shoeless boy… πŸ™‚ im glad you dropped by again…

  • Michele Spector

    March 28, 2010 at 10:57 am

    I really liked this one. It just had such a nice rhythm, it really flowed nicely. You words ring out simply and elegantly!

    1. ishabelle

      March 28, 2010 at 11:42 am

      thank you so much for visiting my blog, michelle… πŸ™‚

  • nanno1982

    March 28, 2010 at 11:57 pm

    lovely and sad words dear Isha..
    I loved it though.. my kind of poems i like πŸ™‚

  • fiveloaf

    March 30, 2010 at 10:11 am

    wowo- what can i say- this is perfect.. (wink!)

  • cyril

    October 30, 2010 at 1:58 pm

    cul de sac,,i bet!!

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